OmegaSubmission

Act 1:

Part 1
A girl is standing in the middle of her room,today happens to be her 13th birthday,yet she is going to be named today what shall her name be?

ButtGirl McLadyFart

What is wrong with you?!

Caroline Zolande
Good!

Caroline you wkd up to find birthday cupcakes all over your room. Mom probobly put these here as a presents,you look around the room to see that your being Pestered on by a friend on PesterChum. Your User is VideoDeva,or VD for short,you open up your PesterChum Page,only one person is on,your friend GodessTechGears,or GG for short.

GG:Hey did you get your Sburb copy yet?!!!

GG:TD Is bothering the crap out of me for me to play with him its sad actually

GG:Hurry answer me????

VD:Wat?!!!!

GG: Did you get that stupid game???

GG:Message TD he is annoying me so much trying to get me to do that idiotic game with him!

VD:I don't know I just woke up a few minutes ago!

VD: PLUS my mom left so many birthday cupcakes in my room!

VD:It's all she makes...

GG:Just message TD when he gets on!

GodessTechGears ceased pestering VideoDeva


Caroline look around your room at all your great YouTube Celebraty Posters! Admire Tobuscus Intro Poster.
,it amazes your eyes. Caroline look out window to see if mail arrived. GASP. The red upside down L is up meaning MAIL. Suddenly your mothers car comes in,crap she beat you to the mail box. Wait she walks out to reveal a small green box,and opened the mailbox. She took out from the mailbox a red box,and Sburb copy.

Caroline quickly open your secret drawer under your bed that nobody knows about but you!. Take a fake mustache and a pair of sunglasses,use them as a disguise. Now run out your door and ready to face your mom!

OmegaSubmissionStory

Act 1

Part 2

Caroline ran into the kitchen and saw her mother holding a large Cupcake as big her head,her mother turned to see Caroline. She then offered the cupcake,Caroline shook her head. Her mother didn't take no for an answer. Caroline then saw some smoke pellets conveniently on a red package,and Sburb copy. She then grabs the smoke pellets and grabs throws them done activating them. Her mom took a broom trying to stop the smoke detractor. Caroline capturloged the cupcake,and the parsols.

Suddenly she came to her room to see she was being messages by a friend.

2 people were online 

TickTackDeath or TD
And
FreedomGoblem or FG

TD was messaging him

TD: Dude,did you get your copy?

TD:I've got mine and I want to test it on your house.

VD: Of coarse it just came in the mail,I got it here.

TD: Okay now download the stuff..

VD: okay I guess.....

Caroline put Sburb copy into computer. Suddenly a black window appears.


VD: Okay a black screen appeared,

TD: Just press the Space button to Start...

VD: Okay I guess...

Caroline push space suddenly a loading sequence took place as a logo spun and showing the land around the world. It got finished,

VD: Okay I'm set now what?

TD: Easy...

Suddenly TD then grabbed Caroline's bed and then he brought it onto the roof.

TD: Crap...

VD: Is my bed on the roof?

TD: Uh yeah sorry I'm just learning the controls...

TD: Okay I think I got it...

Caroline's mom drove off in her car.

VD: My mom is leaving hopefully she doesn't notice the roofbed...

TD: Let's give his a shot...

Suddenly TD expanded Caroline's room,he then looked over at some items he could place. He placed something called a Tomtemizer. Caroline approached the large device she poked it a bit..

TD: What are you doing?!!!

VD: Poking the piece of crap,

VD: It looks "interesting"

TD:Heh...

TD notice a thing of currency,he put his mouse over it 16/20 Build Grist.

TD: I think expanding your room made us loose some of this currency called Build Grist...

VD: Thats bad right??

TD: Not sure....

TD: I guess I'll just screw your house...

TD placed an Alchamizer on the terrace,

Act 1

Part 3

TD placed a Cruxtader, in the living room making a big racket,

VD: what the heck?!

TD: Sorry,I dropped it from a height

VD: well stop what can i do thats productive???

TD: The walkthroughs say something about going to this Cruxtader for a "sprite"

VD: oh cool ill do that now

Caroline run downstairs to acquire this sprite. You see a large machine in the middle of your living room.

TD: You'll need to turn that handle.

Caroline look at machine. A handle appears to be on the side of a large closed off pipe. You turn it activates something that pushes up the cap,something comes put.

TD: Okay that's your sprite,

TD: Apparently you need to prototype it,twice

VD: okay...

TD: Hm...walkthroughs are so short and hardly useful

TD: I might as well put one up.

VD: okay while you do that I'll do something

TD: It says prototype your sprite with something dead or ya know...

VD: how useful...

TD; Hey,I've got the place up and ready.

TD: I've placed another machine,and finished the walkthrough.

VD: well whats next???

TD: Well found anything to prototype it with?

VD: no

VD: we could use my dead parrot.

TD: Where is it?

VD: HE is in....

VD: uh....

VD: i think the garage....

TD: You think?

Caroline walk into garage and look at an old golden cage. Memoreies,they were good memories nor were they bad. Suddenly the cage breaks and parrot at the sprite. Suddenly a light flashes then it stops you see the sprite is now a Parrot head. It is now ParrotSprite.

TD: There this thing should protect you.

Suddenly a car pulls up,moms is home.

VD: crap my mom is home...

TD: Don't worry I won't place or move stuff in her way...

VD: oh good im dead big time...

Earlier Today...

OmegaSubmissionStory

Act 1

Part 4

A young gothic boy is standing in his room,he is 13 yet he is being named today what shall his name be?

Useless EmoCrap

Can you be any more idiotic?

Mark Jeffrey
Good

Mark stand look to your bed to see 3 notebooks. Nobody can put there eyes on these but you. Mark take laptop and pester GG

TickTackDeath began pestering GodessTechGears

TD: Dude I got my copy,set your up now!

TD: Answer!

TD: Answer you ignorant bastard!

GG: SHUT UP ALREADY!!!!!!!!1!!!111

TD: I would of you would answer me.

GG:RAHRAGARAHARARAFHHBAARABA

GG: no im busy! A bunch of cats are all up on my crap,im taken my sis freakin awesome sword and kill those idiotic cats and screw then down into my window

TD: Uh....that sounds...nice?

GG: it will be when I see there blood on that epic katana

TD: You gonna play or what?

GG: damn it im busy

GodessTechGears ceased pestering TickTackDeath

Mark look at around your room. All there is is one large bed,a dresser,and open space on the wall. Wow you really need to get out more... Anyways go out your room to see if you can get to Joe,your dead pet Hammerhead Shark,grab your Laptop and it's case. You run out then stop to see that down the hall you almost were about to pass is your dad he is standing there with a glass of wine he is just looking down the hall. You sneak pass using your amazing acrobatics,Lou don't have amazing acrobatics but you can run fast.

Mark run downstairs to see that all of your dads portraits of Peaches were bothering you so much. You look outside to see that it's storming with grey clouds of lighting. You run to the large double doors and open them. You run down the giant stairs to and go into the small stone shed like house where your hammerhead's corpse lays. You see his dead body laying on the stone table,you take a moment of sielence for the pour thing. You then start to pester Caroline.

TickTackDeath began pestering VideoDeva

TD: Dude,did you get your copy?

TD:I've got mine and I want to test it on your house.

VD: of coarse it just came in the mail,i got it here.

TD: Okay now download the stuff..

VD: okay i guess.....

Mark waited for her reply

VD: okay a black screen appeared

TD: Just press the Space button to Start...

VD: okay i guess...

Mark get ready to exercise what is known as SBURB.

VD: okay im set now what?

TD: Easy...

Suddenly Mark then grabbed Caroline's bed and then he brought it onto the roof.

TD: Crap...

VD: is my bed on the roof?

TD: Uh yeah sorry I'm just learning the controls...

TD: Okay I think I got it...

Caroline's mom drove off in her car.

VD: My mom is leaving hopefully she doesn't notice the roofbed...

TD: Let's give his a shot...

Suddenly Mark expanded Caroline's room,he then looked over at some items he could place. He placed something called a Tomtemizer. mark saw that Caroline was poking it.

TD: What are you doing?!!!

VD: poking the piece of crap,

VD: it looks "interesting"

TD:Heh...

Mark notice a thing of currency,he put his mouse over it 16/20 Build Grist.

TD: I think expanding your room made us loose some of this currency called Build Grist...

VD: thats bad right??

TD: Not sure....

TD: I guess I'll just screw your house...

Mark placed an Alchamizer on the terrace,

Act 1

Part 5

Mark placed a Cruxtader, in the living room making a big racket,

VD: what the heck?!

TD: Sorry,I dropped it from a height

VD: well stop what can i do thats productive???

Mark checked the walkthroughs and read everything they said.

TD: The walkthroughs say something about going to this Cruxtader for a "sprite"

VD: oh cool ill do that now

TD: You'll need to turn that handle.

TD: Okay that's your sprite,

TD: Apparently you need to prototype it,twice

VD: okay...

TD: Hm...walkthroughs are so short and hardly useful

TD: I might as well put one up.

VD: okay while you do that I'll do something

Mark typed an entire 3 paragraph walkthrough and told about everything he has found so far and what others can do.

TD: It says prototype your sprite with something dead or ya know...

VD: how useful...

TD; Hey,I've got the place up and ready.

TD: I've placed another machine,and finished the walkthrough.

VD: well whats next???

TD: Well found anything to prototype it with?

VD: no

VD: we could use my dead parrot.

TD: Where is it?

VD: HE is in....

VD: uh....

VD: i think the garage....

TD: You think?

Mark selected he cage and click destroy as it blew up,he thought it would disappear,he then selected the dead bird and threw it at he sprite,

TD: There this thing should protect you.

Mark sees a car pull up,

VD: crap my mom is home...

TD: Don't worry I won't place or move stuff in her way...

VD: oh good im dead big time...

With Caroline,

Caroline then ran with her sprite to her room Craoline look under the bed,you pull out a large wooden spear.

TD: A spear?

TD: What's that from?

VD: uh....i made it...

TD: Okay? You should message GG about that.

Caroline pestered GG 

VD: hey GG Mark told me to message you about my spear thing,

GG: huh u oh about the strife specibus,here go to your strife crap

VD: uh...okay

Caroline looked at the back of her strife specibus,and selected Spearkind,she dragged her spear to it and her strife specibus became Spearkind.

GG: there now you can attack crap if needed

VD: how do you know this???

GG: my sis taught me she knows about this crap and is awesome.

VD: uh yeah...


VideoDeva ceased pestering GodessTechGears 

TD: Did you talk to that ignorant bastard?

VD: Yeah,

TD: Good,now-

Caroline saw that TD was. Now offline,probably his Internet broke down again. It had been doing that,she then looked out her window a bright light shined. Her ParrotSprite then flew downstairs and then looked at the ashes of her ancestor,Grandfather in a vase.